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Friday, 12 June 2020
Professor Plums Potion
Professor Plum’s Potion
Professor Plum had been locked in his potion lab, he had been making potions for his mum and dad to make their rooms smell nice. He made the potion the colour purple for his mum the colour blue for his dad. He made a potion for his sister and brother. The potion colour was blue for his brother and his sister was purple just like the mum and dad.
They liked the potion, they said the potion smells good it smelt like strawberries and blueberries.
Professor Plums has a sister that is 32 and he has a brother that is 47.
And professor plum is 69. His mum is 78 and dad is 89. Professor plum loves his family.
His mum, his dad, his sister and his brother said thank you for the potion, they all like the potions Professor Plum makes. He likes to make potions.
His sister that is 32 wants to make potions one day just like his.
One day you will become a superstar and all of us will be there and so will your friends. We like your potion they smell good and they look good
We all like your potion Professor Plum.
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Hi I'm Sophie from Matawai School. I like your writing you about potions. Maybe next time you could write more about the sister, mum, dad and the brother in the story.What book is it from? Is it from a book?
ReplyDeleteno it is not in a book and i should tall more of the sister mum dad and the brother in the story and i like your name sophie.
ReplyDeleteHi Harmony,
ReplyDeleteWow, that potion sounds like it would smell awesome.
Thanks very much for sharing your learning with everyone. Your writing is really descriptive
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Hi I'm Steve from Google NZ.
ReplyDeleteI really like your description of the potion as it sounds like it smells amazing !
Thanks for sharing your learning
Nga Mihi
Steve